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pdevine
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I hope this posts ok. I have tried everything I can think of for this darn label and I am still not liking it. Please give me some opinions/advice any and all are more than WELCOME. This is being printed on 2" and 2.5" glossy round labels. TIA Portia
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pdevine
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Re: Help posting a label?
« Reply #1 on: Jul 9th, 2005, 10:56am » |
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Anybody? 
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mizbizzyb
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Re: Help posting a label?
« Reply #2 on: Jul 9th, 2005, 11:00am » |
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Long shot here....Do you have a photo program that you can paste the label to so that you can save a photo file? Dunno?
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I used to have a shoe addiction...with these candles I can only get 3-4 pair a month...It is sending me thru a depression. hahaha
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MichelleOH
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Re: Label opinions PLEASE (pic attached)
« Reply #3 on: Jul 9th, 2005, 12:37pm » |
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I applaud your effort of creating your own label. It is hard work. OK....I don't know if I like your phone number. It just looks like a row of numbers. Let me study it some more and I'll get back to you.
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mizbizzyb
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Re: Label opinions PLEASE (pic attached)
« Reply #4 on: Jul 9th, 2005, 12:56pm » |
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I agree with the phone number....and maybe center the name of the scent.
Otherwise, you did a good job!
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I used to have a shoe addiction...with these candles I can only get 3-4 pair a month...It is sending me thru a depression. hahaha
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7Angela7
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Re: Label opinions PLEASE (pic attached)
« Reply #5 on: Jul 9th, 2005, 2:13pm » |
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I think your company name "Devine Scents" should be placed together more - the wings are making it too spaced out. I don't think your zip code is necessary on the label, maybe put it on the bottom for your caution label? I also think your phone number should have (123) 456-7890 or 123.456.7890 or something like that. And I'm not sure I like the scent name on the left hand side...doesn't really look right to me. Okay, one more thing - I kinda think you should maybe make the text (written in navy & purple) to maybe black & purple?
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mystical_angel1219
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Re: Label opinions PLEASE (pic attached)
« Reply #6 on: Jul 9th, 2005, 2:38pm » |
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These are my suggestions. 
1. Center the graphic. Put company name above it.
2. Put "Devine Scents" in one line~ with a BOLD font.
3. Contact info~ on the bottom, and smaller fonts with spaces. Phone number in 000.000.0000 format.
Then on the bottom:
Your city/state [space in between] Phone number
All in one line.
4. Add a border, all around the edges, even a simple line in a contrasting color.
5. "Apple Cinnamon" made MUCH smaller.
6. Center all text.
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SatinDucky
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Re: Label opinions PLEASE (pic attached)
« Reply #7 on: Jul 9th, 2005, 4:06pm » |
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Crwating a label can be very hard, especially if you're "design challenged" like me...lol.
I must say, the others have done better than me... I had no clue those strings of numbers were a zip and phone. May I ask the purpose of putting the zip on it? As for the rest.. I agree with the others on most. However, (and this is a personal opinion, mind you) I don't care for the angel graphic. It looks too cartoonish (is that a word?..LOL). More like something you would find at a dollar store 
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Re: Label opinions PLEASE (pic attached)
« Reply #8 on: Jul 10th, 2005, 12:11am » |
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Just asking, but is your angel wearing glasses? If not, what's the dark line under her eyes?
Good to see you are working with making your own labels  Hang in there. We all have a lot of diff. tastes.
My other suggestions:
1) Find a more divine font, something that has lift and air to it. This one doesn't do it for me.
2) Depending on what you say about your angel, I might suggest trying to find another
3) Play around with sizing. There's a lot here that's sending my eyes in several directions too quickly.
4) Get the scent up higher ... I wanna know what I'm looking at or getting ready to look at. Don't make me have to ID it by nose or wade to find it. If I'm remembering it right, it goes name of bus., contact info and then the scent is near the bottom. You could shrink that contact info and flop it with the scent.
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Sherie
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Re: Label opinions PLEASE (pic attached)
« Reply #9 on: Jul 10th, 2005, 12:18am » |
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on Jul 10th, 2005, 12:11am, Scented wrote:| Just asking, but is your angel wearing glasses? If not, what's the dark line under her eyes? |
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LOL, I think those are eye lashes! 
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Re: Label opinions PLEASE (pic attached)
« Reply #10 on: Jul 10th, 2005, 12:26am » |
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on Jul 10th, 2005, 12:18am, Sherie wrote:
LOL, I think those are eye lashes! |
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Geez they say all goes south when you pass 40 ... guess my eyes are just going poof instead!
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Re: Label opinions PLEASE (pic attached)
« Reply #11 on: Jul 10th, 2005, 10:43am » |
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on Jul 10th, 2005, 12:18am, Sherie wrote:
LOL, I think those are eye lashes! |
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I think they're like dark heavy eyelashes with her eyes closed. Like demure or praying or something
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pdevine
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Re: Label opinions PLEASE (pic attached)
« Reply #12 on: Jul 10th, 2005, 11:31am » |
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Thank you all so much for the advice. Now it's back to the drawing board. I too think the angel looks too cartooney/girly, I'm getting someone to come up with another logo so I just used this one so that I would have something to work around in placing the wording for now. Boy and I thought candles was the hard part. Thanks,,,Portia
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Terrie
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Re: Label opinions PLEASE (pic attached)
« Reply #13 on: Jul 10th, 2005, 11:52am » |
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I think a subtle graphic of a pair of angel wings would be awesome for the name of your biz. Maybe even the outline of a pair of wings? Just a thought.
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pakueps
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Re: Label opinions PLEASE (pic attached)
« Reply #14 on: Jul 11th, 2005, 4:47am » |
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on Jul 9th, 2005, 8:46am, pdevine wrote:I hope this posts ok. I have tried everything I can think of for this darn label and I am still not liking it. Please give me some opinions/advice any and all are more than WELCOME. This is being printed on 2" and 2.5" glossy round labels. TIA Portia
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I like it, but I would make divine scents all on one like on the top, move up the phone number, and center fragrance scent.
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pakueps
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Re: Label opinions PLEASE (pic attached)
« Reply #15 on: Jul 11th, 2005, 4:50am » |
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on Jul 11th, 2005, 4:47am, pakueps wrote:
I like it, but I would make divine scents all on one like on the top, move up the phone number, and center fragrance scent. |
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Edit because I can't spell. I would make Divine Scents all on one LINE, not like. sorry
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